Your lost your rhyme scheme somewhere. It's supposed to be abab, cdcd, but you have half / bath as a rhyme and overstock / fox as a rhyme, as well as forever / overbox.
You were supposed to include personification and onomatopoeia in the poem and both are missing.
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Your lost your rhyme scheme somewhere. It's supposed to be abab, cdcd, but you have half / bath as a rhyme and overstock / fox as a rhyme, as well as forever / overbox.
You were supposed to include personification and onomatopoeia in the poem and both are missing.
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