Everday somebody mother is crying
cause they babies
out here on the
street selling drug to
the young
Everday somebody
mother is crying
cause they
kidz are
dieing
Everday somebody mother is
crying cause they
babies is in the back
of the policie wogon
why are these mother crying
i guess cause
they looseing
there kidz
one by one
out here on the
street selling drug to
the young
Everday somebody
mother is crying
cause they
kidz are
dieing
Everday somebody mother is
crying cause they
babies is in the back
of the policie wogon
why are these mother crying
i guess cause
they looseing
there kidz
one by one
2 comments:
You have free verse and two or more stanzas here, but there are no metaphors or similes. The criteria for evaluating your work includes these examples of figurative language, which you omitted.
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