Thursday, April 3, 2008

Boyz[poem#5]

they say they love you
they say they care for you
they say never lied to you
they say they never leave you
they say they want to married you
they say they want to start a
family with you
they say they outside with they
homeboy but you get
a phone call from your
homegirl saying hes
right here with
another girl
you go through they phone seeing
Keysha all thought they
incoming call
Boyz I tell
YouBoyz

2 comments:

G. Latman said...
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G. Latman said...

As per your instructions, I am evaluating this poem by which examples of poetic devices you tell me you have used and in which lines. You have not done this. Following instructions does not seem to be one of your strengths.